Here are my model answers to questions 1 to 5 of the AQA Language Paper 1 exam where the exam was based on an extract from Life of Pi. They may be useful for students who want to know how they could have improved on their mock.
It does not include the extract or the exact wording of the questions. The extract and questions are available for download on the AQA website.
Each answer has been written to try and aim for the top band of the mark scheme.
For Q5, I chose to do the story rather than the description and used the drop, shift, zoom, leave method. I have also included a step by step guide with prompts for how to use this method.
For model responses to the November 2022 paper on The Old Man and the Sea use this link: https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/resource-12934137
Model responses for June 2022 on The Pearl can be found here: https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/-13031986
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AQA Language Paper 1 Model Answers 2022-24
Model answers for AQA Paper 1 2022-24. Includes model responses to exams based on the following extracts: The Pearl The Old Man and the Sea The Glass House Life of Pi The Grass is Singing Note the actual extracts are not included but are available to download on the AQA website. For most questions I have tried to provide 2 different model responses so students can compare and contrast how each response meets the markscheme success criteria.
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A large collection of model answers for AQA Language Paper 1 Questions 2, 3, 4 and 5 from past exams. Includes high level model responses for the past 3 exams: Summer 2024 - The Grass is Singing Summer 2023 - Life of Pi November 2022 - The Old Man and The Sea Summer 2022 - The Pearl Also includes lots of extra Paper 1 Question 5 examples with a focus on the drop, shift, zoom, leave structure, pathetic fallacy opening and using a motif.
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