AQA English Language Paper 1 Question 5 model answer

This is a model answer that I have written for AQA English Language Paper 1, Question 5. It is based on an image of polar bears wandering in front of a mountain. It models to pupils how to use many different language features: different sentence types, similes, metaphors, personification, the senses, adjectives, adverbs, pathetic fallacy and how to use these to create a narrative using the image. I used this in the lesson by asking pupils to highlight and label the language features used, thinking about the effect that they have, and also to model how to progress the narrative whilst including description.