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Children love spotting mistakes and silly things when reading! So I made an OVER THE TOP set of instructions on making buttered toast.

The children need to cross out the unnecessary words/devices/language included. To extend, you could get the children to write the edited set of instructions into their books.

My class really loved this activity - and it really gets the children to understand how to get to the point when writing instructions and not waffling on.

I have included answers too! Some may be debatable but that can be discussed as a class.

Some of the errors include:

  • Alliteration (not in the title)
  • Similes
  • Rhyming
  • Conflicting adverbs that do not match the imperative verb
  • Fronted Adverbials that are not time conjunctions
  • Adjectives
  • Unnecessary information

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