This digital resource provides a comprehensive sample answer for an exam-style question on whether students should work part-time while studying. It includes a clear examination of the advantages and disadvantages of balancing a job alongside school responsibilities. The resource also features a marks breakdown that highlights the strengths of the response, covering content, structure, and language use.
Highlights:
• Balanced Argument: A well-rounded discussion that covers both the benefits, such as time management and financial independence, and the drawbacks, like potential stress and declining academic performance.
• Effective Structure: The response is organized into an introduction, detailed body paragraphs, and a conclusive statement that weighs the pros and cons thoughtfully.
• Real-World Insights: The answer incorporates real examples, like a BBC study, making the argument more relatable and engaging for the reader.
• Persuasive Language and Formal Tone: Utilizes varied vocabulary and persuasive techniques to create a compelling discussion. The use of formal language and transitions between arguments adds coherence and sophistication to the writing.
Key Features of This Writing Style:
• Logical Flow and Development of Ideas: Each point is thoroughly explained with examples that help in illustrating the impact of part-time work on students’ lives. The structured approach improves readability and supports a critical evaluation.
• Language and Expression: High-quality language use, including formal tone, varied vocabulary, and effective linking phrases, enhances the professional feel of the writing. This helps students understand the importance of language in presenting arguments effectively.
This is the ultimate tool for teaching students how to write persuasively, ethically, and effectively—straight to the point, with no unnecessary fluff. It is an excellent classroom resource for examining the structure of argumentative writing and showcasing how to build balanced perspectives.
Make sure to note: You will be purely downloading a sample answer to an exam-style question (for Secondary School English: Kids 12+) and that we also explain how the marks are scored!
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• Pages: 5 Includes a Terms of Use (TOU) page, a “Get to Know Us” page, and all the engaging content you expect! Cover pages are NOT within this file!
• Ideal for Ages: students in secondary schools
• Teaching Duration: 1 class, depending on depth of exploration
• Download Now: This digital product is the full file at your fingertips!
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