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A lesson to help pupils to improve the quality of their writing based around a fairground image. The lesson uses the Alan Peat Exciting sentences to develop a high quality description and focuses on precise and interesting descriptive vocabulary.
Suitable for Y5 and Y6
Matches the 2016 writing criteria for Year 6 Sats teacher assessment.

Resources contains:
- Class powerpoint for teaching including Alan Peat sentence
- Resources for planning using a picture and senses table
- A word bank of high level vocabulary
- A sample text and text with annotation
Creative Commons "Sharealike"

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Amyrollason

4 years ago
5

amyhill0215

4 years ago
5

Can't wait to use this with my class. It looks fantastic!

into_neha

4 years ago
5

Amazing resources. I love this website

littlenotes

4 years ago
5

Genuinely the best resource I've ever used . Have used the basis with other images to stimulate descriptive writing and my pupils have loved it. You have put Years 5 and 6 but I have used it with my years 9 and 10 classes and they loved it so I think every child from year 5 upwards would get something useful from it. Thank you so much for sharing it.

mdwyer

5 years ago
5

really useful, thank you

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