UPDATED FOR 2023
A great writing project to allow children to learn GPS while writing a wonderful story. Great for catch up and will last weeks. You don’t need the book as the PPT has it all.
38 slides (to accompany the book Journey). Each slide has a different focus.
A step by step approach that introduces all aspects of the writing assessment criteria including:
• creating atmosphere, and integrating dialogue to convey character and advance the action
• using a range of cohesive devices, including adverbials, within and across sentences and paragraphs sentences and paragraphs
• using passive and modal verbs mostly appropriately
• using a wide range of clause structures, sometimes varying their position within the sentence
• using adverbs, preposition phrases and expanded noun phrases effectively to add detail, qualification and precision
• using mostly correctly:
inverted commas
commas for clarity
punctuation for parenthesis
• making some correct use of:
semi-colons
dashes
colons
hyphens
• semi-colons to mark the boundary between independent clauses
• colons to mark the boundary between independent clauses
This was a real labour of love. Enjoy.
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I had the previous version of this ppt. It's really easy to follow and covers lots of bases. There are a number of errors/typos though that need sorting before use with children.
Hello - I have now managed to download this resource and am very grateful I could as it is very detailed and clear for the children to follow. Thank you for helping resolve this & for providing the resource!
Fantastic resource, very detailed and progressive to aid the children with their thought processes and writing skills. Thanks for sharing.
This is a fabulous resource that will bring out the best in your pupil's writing. Highly recommended! Thank you Andrew.
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