An 8-page resource which examines a L4 example student timed essay that achieved 13/30 in an AQA GCSE mock exam. Several paragraphs were then re-written by the same student to achieve a L6 grade.
Reasons to love this resource:
- a student’s first attempt at a ‘Jekyll + Hyde essay’
- breaks the essay down paragraph by paragraph and provides teacher feedback
- provides suggested structures for improvement
- example rewritten paragraphs show improvement from a L4 to a L6 by the student
- teacher example paragraphs also provided
- additional task at the end for students to complete themselves
This resource is provided in digital pdf, printable pdf and Powerpoint format for classroom teaching or independent study and revision.
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- L6 / B Grade Essay Example + Feedback (Suspicious Atmosphere)
- L4 / C Grade Essay Example (Secrecy and Reputation)
- Study Questions / Exercises
- Essay Questions + Passage-based Questions
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Jekyll and Hyde: Character Breakdown / Analysis
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