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AQA English language paper 1 2023 - model answers
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AQA English language paper 1 2023 - model answers

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Here are my model answers to questions 1 to 5 of the AQA Language Paper 1 exam where the exam was based on an extract from Life of Pi. They may be useful for students who want to know how they could have improved on their mock. The extract and questions are available on the AQA website. Each answer has been written to try and aim for the top band of the mark scheme. For Q5, I chose to do the story rather than the description. For model responses to the November 2022 paper on The Old Man and the Sea use this link: https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/resource-12934137 Model responses for June 2022 on The Pearl can be found here: https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/-13031986
AQA Language Paper 1 June 2024 Model Answers
MartinBoultonMartinBoulton

AQA Language Paper 1 June 2024 Model Answers

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Model answers for questions 1-5 of the English Language Paper 1 June 2024 paper when the extract was from The Grass is Singing by Doris Lessing. The resource contains both a mid-level answer and a high-level model for questions 2-5 designed to meet the criteria for the top band of the markscheme for each question. There are model responses for both the description and the narrative for question 5. Please note: This pack only contains model answers. I have not included the extract from The Grass is Singing or the questions themselves because I don’t have copyright permission to share either of these. The insert and question paper are available to download from the AQA website.
Drop, Shift, Zoom, Leave Examples for Paper 1 Question 5
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Drop, Shift, Zoom, Leave Examples for Paper 1 Question 5

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The drop, shift, zoom, leave method is an increasingly popular method for approaching Paper 1 Question 5 because it allows a student to show the examiner they can effectively structure a narrative deliberately for effect. This resource contains several 500 word stories written in the drop, shift, zoom, leave style. Students should read the examples. They then attempt to plan and write a drop, shift, zoom, leave narrative of their own.
AQA Language Paper 2 June 2024 Model Answers
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AQA Language Paper 2 June 2024 Model Answers

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High Level Model Answers for questions 2, 3, 4 and 5 of the AQA Language Paper 2 June 2024 paper which involved two non-fiction texts on the topic of medical care. For each answer I have included two advanced model responses. Students read each response and make notes at the bottom of each sheet explaining what they notice about the differences between the responses and debate which would achieve higher marks. I have not included the extracts or the questions themselves for copyright reasons. To obtain these you would need to go on the AQA website.
Worlds and Lives Knowledge Organiser
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Worlds and Lives Knowledge Organiser

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A knowledge organiser containing a brief overview of the main ideas, key quotations, structure and context for the 15 poems from the AQA Worlds and Lives new poetry anthology. Useful for anyone, like me, who is trying to prepare to teach these largely unfamiliar poems for the first time.
Kingship in Macbeth.
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Kingship in Macbeth.

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Perhaps due to the recent coronation, many experts are predicted kingship would be the theme for the exam in 2023. They were wrong. Maybe 2024 will be the year for this key theme to be on the exam. Therefore I have created a 20 slide PowerPoint that guides students through how to plan and respond to a question on kingship in Macbeth. Students go on to write their own response and then compare it to the model response. I believe the model response is full marks and would easily achieve grade 9; however, there will always be some teachers who claim nothing short of postgraduate level writing will receive the much coveted 9 so I am reluctant to make the claim that it would definitely achieve a 9.
AQA Language Paper 1 May 2023 Walkthrough
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AQA Language Paper 1 May 2023 Walkthrough

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An exam walkthrough suitable for a walking talking mock style lesson that systematically goes through how to answer every question on the AQA Language Paper 1 2023 exam where the featured extract was from Life of Pi. Also includes some sample model answers.
Language Paper 2 Walking Talking Exam Walkthrough June 2023
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Language Paper 2 Walking Talking Exam Walkthrough June 2023

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An exam walk-through/walking-talking mock of the June 2023 Language Paper 2 on trains. It includes highly detailed tips for each question. There are high level responses for all of the questions provided along with scaffolding to help students generate a high level response for each question. Over 80 slides in total.
Power and Conflict revising 3 Big Ideas in each poem
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Power and Conflict revising 3 Big Ideas in each poem

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A lesson that revises 3 key big ideas related to power and/or conflict in each poem from the anthology. Students then move to analyse how these big ideas are explored in 2 key quotations from each poem. Suggested answers for both tasks are included. My most comprehensive resource on Power and Conflict poetry is available here with revision posters on every poem: https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/power-and-conflict-revision-sheets-12884928
Power and Conflict 10 Model Responses
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Power and Conflict 10 Model Responses

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10 high grade Power and Conflict model responses covering a wide range of poems from the collection. New: Includes a response to the May 2024 question when Kamikaze was the named poem. My most comprehensive resource on Power and Conflict poetry is available here with revision posters on every poem: https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/power-and-conflict-revision-sheets-12884928
Romeo and Juliet Grade 9 Model Responses
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Romeo and Juliet Grade 9 Model Responses

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A collection of 5 grade 9 model responses to AQA questions. Relationships between adults and children Juliet’s feelings for Romeo (2 versions) Romeo’s feelings for Juliet. Romeo and Juliet’s relationship
Reader's Theatre fluency intervention booklet
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Reader's Theatre fluency intervention booklet

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A booklet aimed at helping Year 6 and Year 7 students with developing their reading fluency over 7/8 weeks. Begin the course by assessing students against the fluency rubric. Re-assess again after the 7 week course and measure the improvement. Each session involves students gaining fluency by re-reading an extract several times to build confidence and fluency. Exact guidance for how to run the sessions are provided to help students build up their skills.
The Laughter of Stafford Girls' High - Feminine Gospels
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The Laughter of Stafford Girls' High - Feminine Gospels

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Hugely detailed and lengthy PowerPoint that includes an overview of key ideas in the poem, annotations of the whole poem and a range of tasks to help students explore the ideas in the poem. Tasks encourage students to explore authorial methods, historicism, and feminist critics. Also guides students towards completing an exam question looking at the position of the poem within the collection as a whole.
The Long Queen - Feminine Gospels
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The Long Queen - Feminine Gospels

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A 28 slide PowerPoint that includes an engaging starter, detailed annotations of each stanza, discussion about the overall message in the poem, comprehension questions, a band 5 sample paragraph and extension tasks involving analytical writing and researching archetypes. Also includes 5 sample essays ranging from low band 5 down to band 2 answering the following question: Examine the view that in Feminine Gospels 'women are presented as victims of society.’ Ideal for moderation or looking at looking at how to build up through the bands. Also contains a revision sheet with analysis of 10 key quotations from the poem on one handy printable sheet.
Mitch 3 full length exam responses to compare Band 3, Band 4, Band 5 A Streetcar Named Desire
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Mitch 3 full length exam responses to compare Band 3, Band 4, Band 5 A Streetcar Named Desire

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This resource contains 3 different responses to the following question: ‘Mitch is presented as a one-dimensional character who contributes little to the tragic impact of the play’. There is a band 3 response, a band 4 response and a band 5 response. This is useful for helping students to clearly see the difference between the attainment bands on the mark scheme. Also contains a revision sheet on Mitch’s character.