Exemplar response for a question about the presentation of violence in Shakespeare’s Romeo and Juliet.
Meets all of the level 6 criteria for AQA Lit Paper 1- roughly a Grade 8 response.
Extract and exam Q provided to help contextualise the response.
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Good argument with useful ideas. But I'm not convinced that the organisation of the response is as good as it could be. For the Spag marks there's an overuse of this dash punctuation mark '-' which seems to be used as a full-stop and a semi-colon and paragraphing is not clear.
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