Example diary entry text for The Iron Man written from the point of view of Hogarth after discovering the Iron Man, plus writing feature find worksheet. This exemplar recount text is perfect as a WAGOLL after reading Chapter 2 of Ted Hughes’ novel.
The model diary text contains these language, grammar and punctuation features:
• Similes
• Metaphors
• Personification
• Repetition for effect
• Onomatopoeia
• Alliteration
• Show not tell feelings
• Rhetorical questions
• Fronted adverbials followed by a comma
• Variety of nouns/verbs/adjectives to avoid repetition
• Noun phrases
• Coordinating conjunctions
• Subordinating conjunctions
• Apostrophes for contractions
• Apostrophes for singular possessions
• Apostrophes for plural possessions
• Hyphens
• Dashes
• Colons
• Brackets
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Answers for the feature identification worksheet included.
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This is excellent example text. Really good for a KS2 English lesson. Thanks :)
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