A Christmas Carol Grade 9 Response Scrooge's fears

A sample high level response with grade and examiner comment to the following exam response:

Wxplore how Dickens presents Scrooge’s fears/anxieties in A Christmas Carol.

Also includes a simple writing frame for students working towards grade 4.

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