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This digital file contains a high-quality GCSE/IGCSE English Language descriptive writing sample answer based on the experience of witnessing a cyclone. Designed for students aged 11-16, this resource demonstrates vivid imagery, powerful storytelling, and advanced writing techniques, helping learners improve their descriptive writing skills.

Language techniques included:

  • Imagery – Creating a vivid picture of the cyclone’s destruction
  • Personification – Bringing the storm to life with human-like qualities
  • Similes & Metaphors – Enhancing descriptions with creative comparisons
  • Sensory Language – Engaging the reader with sight, sound, and touch details
  • Varied Sentence Structures – Building tension and atmosphere
  • Emotive Language – Conveying fear, awe, and suspense

How teachers can use this resource:

  • As an exemplar response to teach effective descriptive writing
  • For classroom analysis of language techniques and structure
  • As a model answer for students to compare with their own writing
  • To inspire creative writing exercises and practice tasks

Benefits for pupils:

  • Enhances exam preparation by showcasing high-level writing
  • Helps develop descriptive and narrative techniques
  • Improves vocabulary and sentence structure
  • Encourages engaging and imaginative storytelling

Why buy?
This PDF provides a top-tier example of descriptive writing, ensuring students understand how to craft compelling responses. It is a ready-to-use classroom resource that saves teachers time while giving students a clear model to aim for high marks in GCSE/IGCSE English Language.

Click the download button to view the entire cyclone sample answer!

Total Page Count in Digital Format: 9

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