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I have ten years experience as an HLTA in a primary school, primarily working with Year 6. Over the years, I have created a bank of resources which I hope may prove useful to others as time savers.

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Great descriptive/creative writing example paragraph - describing the bustle and atmosphere of a busy city street.

Can be used to introduce a descriptive writing activity for pupils.

Also included are notes re: which features to include to make writing more expressive.

Key features include: examples of creative language choices/vocabulary in order to create mood/atmosphere/setting.

Illustrates expaned noun phrases/adverbials/varied sentence structures.

Suitable for KS2.

Document versions are as a pdf and word doc for ease of access.

Further descriptive paragraphs can be found at following:

Thunderstorm! and features (pdf):
https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/resource-13106981
Same Thunderstorm resource as a word doc:
https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/resource-13138537

Erupting Volcano:
https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/resource-12960494 (word doc)

https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/resource-12984370 (powerpoint)

Abandoned House in Forest:

https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/resource-12960501 (word doc)
https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/resource-12978017 (powerpoint)

A Dragon hunting:
KS2 Descriptive Writing Paragraph Model – Dragon!
https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/resource-12959414

Same dragon paragraph as a Powerpoint:
https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/resource-12959437

Also, a resource with ideas of how to make descriptive/creative writing more exciting using figurative language:
https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/resource-12986538

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