This is a model of a diary entry in character. I created this during a year 3/4 unit of work on The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe, by C.S. Lewis- My favourite of the Narnia stories! The children really enjoyed comparing the different personalities of the children in the story.
We made a poster for each child and added words to it as we read. The children who were less confident wrote as Lucy, while the others were able to try writing as Edmund, Peter or Susan if they wanted.
This model features highlighted expanded noun phrases and subordinate clauses to extend HAPS. It also has suggested spellings and vocabulary.
You could adjust this for different age groups by simplifying, or adding more complex vocabulary and editing the amount of text.
I hope you enjoy your work on this fantastic book :)
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