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Year 6 EXP suspense narrative - Alma (Literacy Shed)
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Year 6 EXP suspense narrative - Alma (Literacy Shed)

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Based on Literacy Shed’s ‘Alma’, this suspense narrative WAGOLL is aimed at supporting Year 6 children in reaching the Expected Standard. It is pitched at a High Exp/GD level, allowing for exposure to varied sentence structures and writing techniques to push their writing on. The narrative is written in the first person, as Alma, describing the events leading up to - and including - her touching the doll in the toy shop. The WAGOLL focuses on detailed description of the atmosphere/character movements short, impact sentences Year 6 sentence structures ( : and ; to join clauses, multi-clause, dashes, etc)
Year 6 diary entry - Victorian prisoner (Expected Standard)
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Year 6 diary entry - Victorian prisoner (Expected Standard)

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The WAGOLL is a diary extract, written by a prisoner during the Victorian era. The content is contextually appropriate, to match the treatment of prisoners at the time. The WAGOLL is written at the higher end of the Expected Standard, making it an ideal resource for use whole class. Also included is a word-bank which contains vocabulary to describe the prisoner’s emotions, as well as descriptions of the cell and sentence examples using rule of 3 embedded clauses subordinate clauses parenthesis semi colon with a conjunctive adverb colon to join clauses
Year 6 letter - Expected standard (Holes)
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Year 6 letter - Expected standard (Holes)

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A WAGOLL written from Stanley Yelnats, after his first week at Camp Green Lake. The WAGOLL is written at the higher end of the Expected Standard, making it ideal for whole class use as a supportive text. Also included is a word-bank which includes key vocabulary to describe the setting, character emotions as well as example sentences for brackets for parenthesis colon list relative clause dashes for additional information semi colon to separate clauses
Year 6 diary entry - WW2 (Expected Standard WAGOLL)
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Year 6 diary entry - WW2 (Expected Standard WAGOLL)

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The WAGOLL is made up of two extracts from a diary written across two dates - 22nd September, 1940 and 24th December, 1940. Written from the point of view of a child experiencing the WW2 air raid shelters for the first time, the tone and hopefulness in the writer’s voice shifts from the first entry to the second. The 24th December, 1940 was the night of the Christmas Blitz in Manchester. The child retells the trauma of experiencing the attacks. The WAGOLL is written at the higher end of the Expected Standard, and would be ideal for use as a whole class stimulus to develop and extend the voice of a character. The WAGOLL focuses on informal tone (whilst remaining contextually appropriate for the time period) Adverbials of time/time conjunctions Emotive language First person Cohesion within and across paragraphs
Year 6 persuasive letter - Private Peaceful (Expected Standard)
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Year 6 persuasive letter - Private Peaceful (Expected Standard)

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The WAGOLL is based on Michael Morpurgo’s ‘Private Peaceful’ and is a letter written from the Colonel to the men working on his estate, persuading them to join the war efforts. It is pitched at the higher end of the Expected Standard, and is ideal for use as a whole class resource. Also included is a word-bank, providing phrases to describe the war, the men at home, the situation, the troops fighting and the enemy. The WAGOLL focuses on formality of language persuasive techinques semi colon lists dashes for emphasis colons and semi colons to join clauses subordination
Year 6 GD suspense narrative - Alma (Literacy Shed)
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Year 6 GD suspense narrative - Alma (Literacy Shed)

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Based on Literacy Shed’s ‘Alma’, this Greater Depth suspense narrative WAGOLL is aimed at supporting Year 6 children in reaching the Higher Standard. It is pitched at a GD level, allowing for exposure to varied sentence structures and writing techniques to push their writing on. The narrative is written in the first person, as ‘the boy on the bike’, describing the events leading up to - and including - Alma entering the toy shop and letting the door close, without allowing the boy to escape. The WAGOLL focuses on writing from a different perspective detailed description of the atmosphere/character movements short, impact sentences Year 6 sentence structures ( : and ; to join clauses, multi-clause, dashes, etc)
Year 6 suspense narrative - Private Peaceful (Greater Depth)
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Year 6 suspense narrative - Private Peaceful (Greater Depth)

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The WAGOLL is pitched at the Greater Depth level, though could be used whole class as a stimulus to support sentence structure and to develop use of vocabulary and language. The scene takes place in the trenches of World War One, focusing on the protagonists of Michael Morpurgo’s ‘Private Peaceful’. It takes place over a three minute time period, counting down to the order to go over the parapet and into the trenches. Also included is a figurative language word-bank, giving examples of hyperbole, pathetic fallacy, personification, metaphor and simile. The WAGOLL focuses on Figurative language (hyperbole, pathetic fallacy, personification, metaphor and simile) ‘Show, not tells’ for character emotion Cohesion within and across paragraphs Dialogue to advance the action Creating atmosphere and character through descriptions
Year 6  newspaper - Alma (Literacy Shed) High Expected/Greater Depth
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Year 6 newspaper - Alma (Literacy Shed) High Expected/Greater Depth

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This Year 6 newspaper is written to the Greater Depth standard, though could be used as a whole class WAGOLL to stretch children’s sentence structure and vocabulary use. The newspaper article is based on Literacy Shed’s ‘Alma’, and reports on the concerns of the families and children remaining in the town, after the disappearances of almost two dozen children. Also included is a Word Bank, giving phrases to describe the event, the children’s reaction, the townsfolk’s reaction and the police. The WAGOLL focuses on direct speech reported speech appropriate selection of formality (shifting during quotes) sensationalised language (emotive)
Year 6 balanced argument (Expected level) - Victorian workhouses
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Year 6 balanced argument (Expected level) - Victorian workhouses

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The following WAGOLL is an ‘expected’ level balanced argument on the pros and cons of Victorian workhouses. The download includes a word-bank, with vocabulary to support the children’s writing, as well as example sentences and sentence openers. The piece is ideal for use as a whole class writing example, and is of particular use as a writing moderation piece. The text focuses on: Formality of language Adverbials to create cohesion Colons to introduce a list Embedded clauses Semi colons lists Semi colons to separate clauses
Year 6 Street Child narrative (expected standard)
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Year 6 Street Child narrative (expected standard)

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The following WAGOLL is a narrative, written in the third person, describing Mr Spink arriving at the Jarvis family’s room and demanding rent. When the family cannot provide, they are sent onto the streets. Included is a word-bank, giving examples of setting descriptions, and descriptions of the family members. The WAGOLL is ideal for use as a whole class writing stimulus for Year 6 children, and would be of particular use as a moderation piece. The WAGOLL focuses on: creating character and atmosphere dialogue to advance the action shifting tone in formality
Year 6 non-chronological report - WW1 trenches (expected standard)
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Year 6 non-chronological report - WW1 trenches (expected standard)

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The WAGOLL is written at the expected standard for Year 6, and would be ideal for use as a moderation piece. It describes the life in the trenches for World War One soldiers. Also included is a word-bank which includes key vocabulary, as well as example sentences for children to use within their writing. The WAGOLL focuses on: use of headings and subheadings third person embedded clauses paragraphs for changes in topic semi colon to join clauses (with a conjunctive adverb - ideal for EXP level evidence)
Year 6 Street Child narrative (Greater Depth)
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Year 6 Street Child narrative (Greater Depth)

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The following WAGOLL is based on Berlie Doherty’s ‘Street Child’ and is written from the point of view of the character ‘Mr Spinks’. The narrative focuses on the scene in which Mr Spinks enters the room of the Jarvis family, demanding their rent. When they’re unable to pay, he sends them onto the streets. The WAGOLL is ideal for use as either a whole class stimulus, or for a group of more-able Year 6 children to write from a different point of view. Also included is word-bank, giving examples of setting descriptions and characters. The narrative focuses on: Switches in formality Dialogue to advance the action Creating character and atmosphere
Year 6 Holes chapter (expected standard)
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Year 6 Holes chapter (expected standard)

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The following WAGOLL tells the story of what happened to ‘Barfbag’: the teenager who was a camper at Camp Green Lake before the arrival of Stanley Yelnats. In Louis Sachar’s ‘Holes’, we read that Barfbag was bitten by a rattle snake. This short chapter, writable within a week, adds the missing scene to the book. The WAGOLL would be ideal for use with a Year 6 class whilst reading the text, and would be an ideal piece for moderation. Also included is a word-bank, which includes key vocabulary as well as provides full example sentences for the children to incorporate into their writing. The WAGOLL focuses on: dialogue to advance the action shifts in formality parenthesis semi colon to join clauses (often with a conjunctive adverb - ideal for the expected standard) split speech