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Here’s an essay completed by one of my students taking the ‘AQA Power and Conflict’ poetry module. It was his first comparative essay and his first poetry essay, so he did amazingly well! However, there is also clear room for improvement - I would expect the same student to be on a minimum of an L7 / A Grade by the time he takes his exams. I have given detailed feedback underneath to help him improve, plus a breakdown of the mark scheme and grade boundaries to show how his essay would convert to a specific grade.

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Everything you need to teach or study 'Power and Conflict' poetry! This bundle contains a set of 15 comprehensive study guides for the poems, plus additional tasks, exercises and exam support. Example mid and top grade answers, and a mark scheme breakdown are also provided! **Currently available at a 55% discount! Want to preview the study guides? Download [our Ozymandias Study Guide](https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/resource-13140286) for FREE here! *If you buy this resource and find it useful, we’d be very grateful if you could leave an honest review - to say thank you, we’re happy to give you a second resource completely free of charge. Just drop us an email at admin@scrbbly.com with your TES name, the name of the resource you reviewed, and which one you’d like for free. We’ll email it over to you within 24-48 hours.* Each resource in this bundle is provided as a digital + printable PDF and PowerPoint for adaptable teaching and studying - perfect for classrooms, homework, homeschooling and independent study. POEM STUDY GUIDE CONTENTS: THE POEM (copyright permitting) VOCABULARY STORY + SUMMARY SPEAKER + VOICE POETIC DEVICES FORM + STRUCTURE CONTEXT ATTITUDES + MESSAGES THEMES + DEEPER IDEAS KEY QUOTATIONS EXTRA TASKS COMPREHENSION EXERCISES POSSIBLE ESSAY QUESTIONS (12-18 pages per study guide!) POEMS INCLUDED IN THE BUNDLE: ['Bayonet Charge'](https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/resource-12439760) ['Charge of the Light Brigade'](https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/resource-12430295) ['London'](https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/resource-12437870) ['Ozymandias'](https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/resource-13140286) ['Poppies'](https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/resource-12445539) ['Remains'](https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/resource-12442578) ['Storm on the Island'](https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/resource-12437890) ['The Émigrée'](https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/resource-12452475) ['War Photographer'](https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/resource-12258564) [Extract from 'The Prelude'](https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/resource-12436729) ['My Last Duchess'](https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/resource-12242638) ['Kamikaze'](https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/resource-12462310) ['Checking Out Me History'](https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/resource-12462894) ['Tissue'](https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/resource-12450297) ['Exposure'](https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/resource-12502174) BONUS MATERIAL: [Storm on the Island: Essay Planning](https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/resource-13140390) [War Photographer + Exposure L9 / A* Grade Comparative Essay Example](https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/resource-13140383) [Bayonet Charge + Charge of the Light Brigade L6 / B Grade Comparative Essay Example + Feedback](https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/resource-12491333) [London + Checking Out Me History L7/L8 - A/A* Grade Essay + Feedback](https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/resource-12671846) [Ozymandias + Power L7/A Grade Essay Example + Feedback](https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/resource-12798969) View our [SHOP for other literature and language resources](https://www.tes.com/teaching-resources/shop/Scrbbly)!

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