Here is an example answer written by a teacher, in timed conditions (hence being
slightly rushed at the end!). The answer would receive close to full marks, as it
contains a clear set of organised ideas, with advanced vocabulary and techniques - providing a dynamic and sustained personal voice and engaging style. Use it to compare and contrast with your own example answers.
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