AQA Language Paper 1 Q2 MODEL RESPONSES

Spotting the difference between model responses

Based on the 2018 AQA English Language Paper 1. These PDF slides present three pairs of responses side by side and ask students to concentrate on what is missing from B that we find in A. Model identifying the differences. Link response to mark scheme and AOs if appropriate.

Notes for explaining the difference between level 4 and 3

Level 4 - Links ideas together to create a greater sense of overall understanding of effects - rather than ‘golden’ just being linked to the idea of positivity, the student moves further into exploring the connotations of the adjective - recognising the association with nostalgia and romanticising
Level 4 - A more concise use of language
Level 4 - Possesses a greater sense of fluidity of ideas