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A model descriptive writing text based on the beautiful wordless picture book Journey by Aaron Becker.

The model text describes the girl approaching and entering the city in her boat.

The description comes with a feature find task, which asks pupils to search for the following writing features including figurative language and other literary devices:
• similes
• metaphors
• hyperbole
• personification
• repetition for effect
• onomatopoeia
• alliteration
• show not tell feelings

An answer sheet has been included.

The description can be used as a WAGOLL before pupils write their own description based on Journey.

The resources come in easily editable Word format and as PDFs.

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Other Journey themed resources:
Example Writing BUNDLE
Example Diary Text Pack
Character Profile Example Text Pack
Dialogue Text Examples Pack

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Journey: Example Writing BUNDLE

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