I'm not sure that all of your lines in your examples on p.10 have an adjective and a noun - many of them have 2 nouns, a verb with -er on the end is a noun. I've adapted this for my class.
MadCoo153
9 years ago
The title on slide 10 ends with a question mark to indicate that discussion is needed. During class discussion the children identify the lines which need updating and I underline them on slide 11 on the IWB. This then enables the children to understand the need to review and edit their work and provides the less able children with a scaffoled piece to adapt to produce their own Kenning.
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