Out Out - Poem by Robert Frost

I like the annotated poem but the resource as a whole needs proof-reading; I spotted at least two typos. The writing about personification is good; the second 'essay' on rhyme scheme is poor. The contextual reference to this being a 'garden accident' is misleading; there is no mention of the contemporary newspaper report that was the stimulus for Frost's poem. I do think the link with the trench warfare happening at the time in Europe is a good one and might benefit from further development.