This resource provides a superb sample answer examining the statement: “People work better in teams than on their own.” It presents a balanced analysis of both perspectives, offering insights into the benefits of teamwork and the potential advantages of working individually. The resource includes a sample answer—the essay itself—and a marks breakdown that highlights the strong aspects of this response.
Highlights:
• Balanced Analysis of Perspectives: The essay begins by exploring the benefits of teamwork, supported by recent studies highlighting the reduced stress and increased confidence experienced by those working in groups. It also examines successful companies—like Amazon and Apple—that rely heavily on teamwork. This balanced perspective is strengthened by addressing the opposing view, noting potential challenges such as interpersonal conflict and inefficiencies that can arise in team settings.
• Real-World Examples and Critical Insights: The use of real-world examples, including the success of renowned businesses and medical studies on stress, adds depth to the analysis. This provides a practical understanding of the topic, enhancing the argument in favor of teamwork while acknowledging its drawbacks.
• Effective Structure and Conclusion: The essay follows a clear, logical structure, beginning with an introduction, followed by a discussion of the benefits and drawbacks, and concluding with the stronger position—favoring teamwork. The conclusion effectively summarizes the argument, emphasizing the value of social interaction, shared workload, and collective problem-solving.
Key Features:
• Content and Language Proficiency
• Depth and Coherence
This is the ultimate tool for teaching students how to write persuasively, ethically and effectively—straight to the point, with no unnecessary fluff. It is ideal for helping students understand how to present balanced arguments, use real-world evidence, and develop well-structured responses for exam-style questions.
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• Pages: 4-5 Includes a Terms of Use (TOU) page, a “Get to Know Us” page, and all the engaging content you expect! Cover pages are NOT within this file!
• Ideal for Ages: students in secondary schools
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