University personal statement for Biomedical Engineering. (Read description)

I applied for Biomedical Engineering and with this personal statement got accepted into all 5 universities i applied to. Just a word of warning i hear that by copying it word for word can get you caught, so change it up for your own sake. I'd like to think it was short and sweet which is what got me into the course. Check it out :). I placed two drafts of mine, The shorter one was my final one. Just wanted to upload both so you have a better idea.