Year 6 Suspense Story Example

This is a story example that can be used as a scaffolded piece of writing for Year 6 children.
Within the text, there is inclusion of:

• subordinate clauses
• relative clauses
• high level punctuation
• high level vocabulary
• personification
• simile
• metaphor
• parenthesis
• description of settings, characters and atmosphere
• use of inverted commas punctuated accurately
• cohesion across paragraphs

This is a text that can be used to support their writing and one that can be hugged to closely, in particular when writing the ending of the story of the mystery video called “Road’s End” which can be found on Literacy Shed.