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AQA Language Paper 1 November 2022 Model Answers
Model answers for questions 2, 3, 4 and 5 of the November 2022 language exam based on the extract from The Old Man and the Sea by Ernest Hemingway,
For each question, I have provided 2 different answers so students can compare the merits of each. Both are aimed at meeting the top band (level 4) criteria.
For question 5 I have provided a high level response to both questions - the fishing village and the unlikely friendship.
The extract is available on the AQA website.
Appositive Phrases: Animal Farm
Using appositive phrases in your English literature responses will improve the sophistication of your writing. If used correctly, they will impress your examiner. Here are some examples on how to use appositive phrases when writing about the 6 main characters in Animal Farm.
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Appositive Phrases for English literature
Using appositive phrases in your English literature responses will improve the sophistication of your writing. If used correctly, they will impress your examiner. Here are some examples on how to use appositive phrases when writing about the 6 main characters in the following texts:
Macbeth
Romeo and Juliet
A Christmas Carol
An Inspector Calls
Lord of the Flies
Appositive Phrases for GCSE English literature
Using appositive phrases in your English literature responses will improve the sophistication of your writing. If used correctly, they will impress your examiner. Here are some examples on how to use appositive phrases when writing about the 6 main characters in the following texts:
Macbeth
Romeo and Juliet
A Christmas Carol
An Inspector Calls
Lord of the Flies
Animal Farm
Appositive Phrases in A Christmas Carol
Using appositive phrases in your English literature responses will improve the sophistication of your writing. If used correctly, they will impress your examiner. Here are some examples on how to use appositive phrases when writing about the 6 main characters in A Christmas Carol.
Appositive Phrases in Macbeth
Using appositive phrases in your English literature responses will improve the sophistication of your writing. If used correctly, they will impress your examiner. Here are some examples on how to use appositive phrases when writing about the 6 main characters in Macbeth.
Appositive Phrases in Romeo and Juliet
Using appositive phrases in your English literature responses will improve the sophistication of your writing. If used correctly, they will impress your examiner. Here are some examples on how to use appositive phrases when writing about the 6 main characters in Romeo and Juliet.
Appositive Phrases in An Inspector Calls
Using appositive phrases in your English literature responses will improve the sophistication of your writing. If used correctly, they will impress your examiner. Here are some examples on how to use appositive phrases when writing about the 6 main characters in An Inspector Calls.
Appositive Phrases in Lord of the Flies
Using appositive phrases in your English literature responses will improve the sophistication of your writing. If used correctly, they will impress your examiner. Here are some examples on how to use appositive phrases when writing about the 6 main characters in Lord of the Flies. Read the examples then have a go at creating your own sentences that use appositive phrases.
Chain of Events An Inspector Calls Grade 9
A grade 9 response to the following question on An Inspector Calls from the 2022 EdExcel exam:
Explain how the chain of events is important in An Inspector Calls
Evil in Lord of the Flies Grade 9 response
An unequivocal grade 9 response to the 2022 EdExcel question on Lord of the Flies: Explain the significance of evil in the novel.
Anger An Inspector Calls Grade 9 response
A grade 9 815 word response to the following question which was a question on the EdExcel 2022 paper:
In what ways is anger significant in An Inspector Calls?
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'Because, But, So' for GCSE English Literature Texts
If you want your students to write better exam responses which demonstrates more depth to their thinking, you should consider using the ‘because, but, so’ method from the writing revolution.
This resource collates a wide range of exemplar ‘because, but, so’ paragraphs on the most popular GCSE English literature texts for AQA;
Macbeth
Romeo and Juliet
A Christmas Carol
An Inspector Calls
Power and Conflict
After studying the wide range of models, students should gain the ability to write their own ‘because, but, so’ paragraphs in the same style.
'Because, But, So' Paragraphs for GCSE English literature
If you want your students to write better exam responses which demonstrates more depth to their thinking, you should consider using the ‘because, but, so’ method from the writing revolution.
This resource collates a wide range of exemplar ‘because, but, so’ paragraphs on the most popular GCSE English literature texts for AQA;
Macbeth
A Christmas Carol
Romeo and Juliet
An Inspector Calls
Lord of the Flies.
After studying the wide range of models, students should gain the ability to write their own ‘because, but, so’ paragraphs in the same style.
Romeo and Juliet 'Because, But, So' Thesis-style character introductions
‘Because, But, So’ a great tool to teach students to help them demonstrate the depth of their understanding of the literature texts.
This resource collates 9 sample ‘because, but, so’ thesis-style introductions for the 9 most significant characters in Romeo and Juliet.
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Paper 2 Question 5 Exemplars
A huge range of high grade Paper 2 Question 5 exemplars covering a range of familiar topics including zoos, sport, travel, cars, school uniform, camping, holidays and homework.
Paper 2 Question 5 Exemplars
A wide range of high grade exemplars for Paper 2 Question 5 covering a range of typical topics including cars, zoos, homework, travel, sleep, school uniform, sport, careers and national service
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Romeo and Juliet Grade 9 Model Responses
A collection of grade 9 model answers to AQA questions on Romeo and Juliet.
Romeo’s feelings for Juliet.
Juliet’s feelings for Romeo.
Romeo and Juliet’s relationship.
Relationships betweens adults and children.
Plus others.
Romeo and Juliet Grade 9 Model Responses
A collection of 5 grade 9 model responses to AQA questions.
Relationships between adults and children
Juliet’s feelings for Romeo (2 versions)
Romeo’s feelings for Juliet.
Romeo and Juliet’s relationship
Juliet Grade 9 exemplar
A grade 9 model answer focusing on the character of Juliet.
The model answer starts with a thesis statement.
It moves on to analyse the youthful, idealistic nature of Romeo’s feelings for Romeo early in the play.
The second half of the essay moves on to explore the growing maturity of Juliet’s feelings later in the play.
The word count for the response is 1014 words.
Also includes revision cards for critical perspectives into Romeo’s character to really help push for that grade 9 in A03.