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Language Paper 2 Question 5 2023 Grade 9 model answers
3 Grade 9 responses to the 2023 Language Paper 2 Question 5 question which involved writing a speech in which students had to give their opinion on a statement related to cars.
Speech 1: Written in the powerful and emotional style with environmental concerns at the forefront
Speech 2 Written in a slightly humorous/satirical style
Speech 3: Begins and ends with an anecdote.
All 3 speeches should achieve grade 9 due to the sustained use of ambitious vocabulary, a full range of punctuation and sentence structures used for effect alongside the use of cohesive devices to assist whole text structure and organisation.
AQA Language Paper 1 Question 5 2023 3x model answers
3 high grade 500-700 word responses to the AQA 2023 Language Paper 1 Question 5.
Story 1 features an unnamed creature
Story 2 features an eagle
Story 3 features a wolf.
All have been written in an attempt to try and hit the top band of the mark scheme.
AQA English language paper 1 2023 - model answers
Here are my model answers to questions 1 to 5 of the AQA Language Paper 1 exam where the exam was based on an extract from Life of Pi. They may be useful for students who want to know how they could have improved on their mock.
The extract and questions are available on the AQA website.
Each answer has been written to try and aim for the top band of the mark scheme.
For Q5, I chose to do the story rather than the description.
For model responses to the November 2022 paper on The Old Man and the Sea use this link: https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/resource-12934137
Model responses for June 2022 on The Pearl can be found here: https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/-13031986
Romeo and Juliet Plot Summary Cloze Activity
A simple plot summary cloze activity on Romeo and Juliet. Answer sheet included on page 2.
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Paper 2 Question 5 4 model responses
4 model responses for Paper 2 Question 5 from 4 past AQA papers.
Each response starts and ends with an aencdote to gain marks for whole text structure and organisation.
Vocabulary, punctuation and sentence structures are consistently sophisticated and ambitious.
The 4 questions covered are as follows:
June 2020 - Travel
November 2019 - Animals
November 2018 - Cars
June 2018 - Sport
The Witches in Macbeth
This A3 Macbeth revision resource contains analysis of 30 quotations that focus on the influence of the witches across the play. They are presented chronologically.
I ask students to pick out the most important quotations and plot them onto a revision timeline.
Animal Farm Quiz
Comprehension Questions on every chapter from Animal Farm.
Jekyll and Hyde Quiz #2
A second 50 question quiz on Jekyll and Hyde with 5 questions on each chapter. Includes the recommended answer sheet on page 2. Ideal for testing students’ knowledge of the text after a first read-through.
Jekyll and Hyde Quiz
5 challenging multiple choice questions on every chapter of Jekyll and Hyde. There are 50 questions in total. Includes the answer sheet on page 2. Ideall for testing students’ direct knowledge of the text after a first reading.
Designed to fit snugly onto an A3 sheet for ease of printing. Can also work on A4.
Includes a PDF and editable word version.
Paper 2 Question 5 November 2019 Grade 9 response
A grade 9 750 word model response to the AQA November 2019 Paper 2 Question 5 about animals.
Starts with a powerful anecdote before moving to presenting the central argument. It explores and then dismisses the counter argument before adding a conclusion that links back to the opening anecdote to help gain marks for whole text organisation and structure.
Jekyll and Hyde 24 key quotations for GCSE
A revision sheet for 24 key quotations from Jekyll and Hyde.
It includes thoughtful explanations on the three key themes of the novel:
Duality - 8 quotations
Morality - 8 quotations
Appearance versus reality - 8 quotations
Designed to fit snugly onto an A3 or A4 sheet for ease of printing.
Macbeth Timeline
A detailed timeline that charts the development and descent of Macbeth’s character across each act of the play. Embeds key quotations throughout.
Great revision tool of direct knowledge for any question that looks at the development of Macbeth’s character across the play.
Paper 2 Question 5 Grade 9 exemplar (June 2020)
A grade 9 response to the AQA June 2020 Paper 2 Question 5 about whether or not travel was a waste of time.
It starts with a powerful anecdote, has 2 paragraphs arguing the benefits of travel, then it looks at and dismisses the counter argument before reaching a conclusion which links back to the opening anecdote to gain marks for whole text structure and organisation. Vocabulary is sophisticated throughout and punctuation is advanced.
Grade 9 Paper 2 Question 5 AQA November 2018 Cars
A grade 9 response to the AQA November 2018 Paper 2 Question 5 about cars.
It starts with a powerful and detailed anecdote to explain why I agree with the statement.
It considers and then dismisses the counter argument.
It provides a solution.
It ends with a return to the powerful anecdote from the start to gain high makrs for sophisticated organisation and structure.
Vocabulary and punctuation is sophisticated throughout.
Paper 2 Question 5 June 2018 Sport Grade 9
A grade 9 response to the AQA June 2018 Paper 2 Question 5 about corruption in sport.
‘All sport should be fun, fair and open to everyone. These days, sport seems to be more about money, corruption and winning at any cost.’ Write an article for a newspaper in which you explain your point of view on this statement.
It starts with a powerful anecdote.
It moves on to two content paragraphs about how corruption and money is ruining sport.
The next paragraph offers a solution.
It ends by returning to the anecdote to gain high marks for sophisticated whole text structure and organisation.
Romeo and Juliet Character Timeline
A timeline that explains how the characters of Romeo and Juliet develop across each act of the play. Useful revision for preparing to write an exam response on these 2 characters.
Designed to fit snugly onto one A4 or A4 sheet for ease of printing.
Also includes a timeline worksheet on Romeo’s character.
An Inspector Calls Character Quiz
This quiz has 8 multiple choice questions on each of the 6 main characters from An Inspector Calls so 48 questions in total. A great resource for checking students’ understanding of each character. Includes the answer sheet.
Designed to fit snugly onto one A3 or A4 page for ease of printing.
Using a motif for Paper 1 Question 5
Using a motif is a great way to gain marks for structure and organisation in Paper 1 question 5. This resource contains 4 high grade examples of how to use a motif for Paper 1 Question 5. They are responses to the November 2021 question: write a story about a new beginning.
Example 1: Motif is turquoise candle
Example 2: Motif is a broken pocket watch
Example 3: Motif is a silver key
Example 4: Motif is tulips.
Also contains 3 examples that use an object as a motif in drop, shift, zoom, leave narratives.
This is a great resource for modelling how to use motifs so students can then go on to choose their own object to develop across the text.
Guilt An Inspector Calls Model response
A high grade model response looking at how the theme of guilt is explored in An Inspector Calls.
Eric Birling Model Response
A high grade model response looking at how Priestley uses Eric to communicate his authorial message in An Inspector Calls.