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Scrooge Life Lessons May 2024 Grade 7-9 style model responses
3 different A Christmas Carol model responses exploring how Scrooge learns important life lessons across the novella. A similar type of question came up in the AQA May 2024 examination.
I included 3 different responses so it can be used to show different ways of approaching the question.
One response for example, analyses how each ghost imparts important life lessons to Scrooge.
Another response explores how Fred, Fezziwig, Tiny Tim and the Ghost of Christmas Yet to Come all act as mentors in facilitating Scrooge’s transformation. They have been written to meet the requirements for Band 5 and 6 on the mark scheme because they are consistently thoughtful with moments that could one could argue are perceptive in the way they meet the AOs… They may be useful for departmental moderation or for students considering about different ways of structuring their examination responses.
Scrooge's 12 lessons in life
A revision resource looking at 12 lessons Scrooge learns over the course of the novella. Each point is supported by apt quotations from the novel.
Scrooge Life Lessons Timeline
A timeline looking at important life lessons Scrooge learns across the novella featuring detailed analysis of 13 key quotations that help trace his transformational journey.
A Streetcar Named Desire: 6 A/A* model responses
A collection of 6 A/A* A Streetcar Named Desire model responses to various AQA-style exam questions.
Language Paper 2 Walking Talking Exam Walkthrough June 2023
An exam walk-through/walking-talking mock of the June 2023 Language Paper 2 on trains.
It includes highly detailed tips for each question. There are high level responses for all of the questions provided along with scaffolding to help students generate a high level response for each question.
Over 80 slides in total.
Paper 2 Question 5: National Service
A Paper 2 Question 5 focused lesson that asks students to give their views on the idea of teenagers completing compulsory national service.
Students read two sample responses - one primarily agrees with the statement and one primarily agrees. Then students complete their own response using the structure provided.
Extra time is spent looking at how to start off the article in a way that garners an emotional connection with the reader.
A Christmas Carol End of Term Activity
An easy and relaxing end of term worksheet. Students label what they have learned about each character from A Christmas Carol and then colour in each character.
AQA Language Paper 2 June 2024 Model Answers
High Level Model Answers for questions 2, 3, 4 and 5 of the AQA Language Paper 2 June 2024 paper which involved two non-fiction texts on the topic of medical care.
For each answer I have included two advanced model responses.
Students read each response and make notes at the bottom of each sheet explaining what they notice about the differences between the responses and debate which would achieve higher marks.
I have not included the extracts or the questions themselves for copyright reasons. To obtain these you would need to go on the AQA website.
AQA Language Paper 2 June 2022 Model Answer Booklet
A 13 page model answer booklet for the AQA Language Paper 2 Exam where the theme for the non-fiction texts was camping.
There are two high level responses for each question so students can compare the merits of each response and decide which is better.
I have not included question 1 because, of course, it is just multiple choice.
AQA Language Paper 2 Question 5 November 2022 Sleep and Sleeplessness
2 model responses for the AQA Paper 2 Question 5 on the November 2022 paper about sleep and sleeplessness. One letter primarily agrees with the statement while the other primarily disagrees with it.
Paper 2 Question 5 Exemplars
A wide range of high grade exemplars for Paper 2 Question 5 covering a range of typical topics including cars, zoos, homework, travel, sleep, school uniform, sport, careers and national service
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Paper 2 Question 5 4 model responses
4 model responses for Paper 2 Question 5 from 4 past AQA papers.
Each response starts and ends with an aencdote to gain marks for whole text structure and organisation.
Vocabulary, punctuation and sentence structures are consistently sophisticated and ambitious.
The 4 questions covered are as follows:
June 2020 - Travel
November 2019 - Animals
November 2018 - Cars
June 2018 - Sport
Leadership in Lord of the Flies Model Response
A high-level and thorough response exploring how Golding presents ideas about leadership in Lord of the Flies. It has been deliberately written to meet the criteria for A01, A02 and A03.
Juliet Grade 9 exemplar
A grade 9 model answer focusing on the character of Juliet.
The model answer starts with a thesis statement.
It moves on to analyse the youthful, idealistic nature of Romeo’s feelings for Romeo early in the play.
The second half of the essay moves on to explore the growing maturity of Juliet’s feelings later in the play.
The word count for the response is 1014 words.
Also includes revision cards for critical perspectives into Romeo’s character to really help push for that grade 9 in A03.
Mrs Birling Across the Play
A one page summary of everything Mrs Birling says across the play. Can be used in a lot of ways.
Lord of the Flies 10 Model Responses
10 high level model responses to a range of model responses on Lord of the Flies which include the following: the island, the beast, Ralph, Roger, Simon, Jack, Piggy, Roger, littluns, evil, leadership.
Edexcel Conflict Poetry - Essential context (A03)
A handy one page essential context sheet for all 15 poems in the Edexcel conflict poetry anthology. Contains the essential contextual information students need to know for each poem all in one place to help with revision.
My most popular resource on Edexcel conflict poetry, which puts together all my resources into one booklet, is available here: https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/edexcel-conflict-poetry-revision-booklet-12955594
Littluns in Lord of the Flies Model Response
A high level thorough model response which explores the importance of the littluns in Lord of the Flies. The thesis style introduction establishes a conceptualised response. The inclusion of judicious quotations lead on to perceptive comments about Golding’s authorial methods which leads to discussion of authorial message.
AQA Language Paper 2 November 2023 Model Answers Environmental Issues
Model answers for the AQA language paper 2 November 2023 exam where the topic of the two extracts was environmental issues.
For each question (2-5) there are two model responses so students can compare the merits of each. I have not included question 1 because it is just multiple choice.
The extracts and questions for this paper are available to teachers on the AQA website.
World and Lives Revision Flashcards
Revision flashcards for the 15 poems in the Worlds and Lives Poetry Anthology.
Each card has brief notes on main ideas, 3 key quotations, structure and context.
Ideal for anyone in the same position as me and teaching these poems for the first time.