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The ground dry and brown
The twigs crackle underfoot
And the acorns crush.
In woven baskets
The acorns sit, lime green grapes,
While spiders crawl.
Scuttling along,
Busy crawling between twigs
The soundless spiders.
The honesty twigs
Like tiny, papery crisps
Leafless and fragile.
The leaves brown and dry
Feint, touch-definable veins
Now gold and dying.
Now in the autumn
The leaves and plants are dying
Leaves curl, and twigs crack.
The golden acorn
And the dry honesty twigs
The signs of autumn.
By Anna McCartney aged 14, who receives Poems on the Underground (Cassell). Submitted by Sophie Smiley of Netherhall School, Cambridge, whoreceives the Poetry Society’s teachers’ newsletter. For Poetry Society events ring 0171-240 4810.
Reading submissions for this slot, I’ve been powerfully reminded of the value of haiku as an exercise for student writers. It gives them the discipline of a form, without having to worry about metre, and it encourages observation. This renga (a series of haiku) isn’t flawless but there are many more good lines than weak ones, and individual stanzas do what haiku is meant to do - capture a moment in the natural world.
Congratulations to Anna, and to the English department at Netherhall, which sent in several other good poems as well.
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