GCSE Grade 9 History Weimar 12 marker: ‘Explain how the Nazis created a terror state after 1933’ (12) Was awarded full marks and was written in timed conditions, with complex points and perspectives. Main points covered: Concentration camps The SD The gestapo Very solid conclusion 650 words 4 solid, complex and complete paragraphs 1 page and a half long

A-Level A* Full Marks Essay: How significant were the Lincoln Douglas debates in the increased sectional tensions of the years 1858-60? (25 Marks) Was awarded full marks and was written in timed conditions This high-level essay has been well structured, concise and efficient paper 6 very big paragraphs, 1430 words, 2 and a half typed pages

A* A-level History essay: ‘Elizabethan Foreign Policy achieved its objectives’ Assess the validity of this view 1,400 words, 2.5 typed pages, 6 big paragraphs Some of the main paragraph points: Overall view in the introduction that she had partially achieved her objectives She effectively dealt with the threat from Spain in 1588, and therefore successfully met her aim to avoid a foreign invasion successful in healing her relationship with France, especially in her early reign achieved her smaller aim of avoiding a French invasion and Scotland remaining settled  successfully dealt with internal conflict and Catholic conspiracies Solid conclusion: Overall, her foreign policy was broadly successful, with a clear shift of focus to England’s national security rather than military glory Was awarded full marks and was written in timed conditions This high-level essay has been well structured, concise and efficient paper

GCSE Grade 9 History Medicine 12 marker: ‘In what ways has the role of the gov in public health changed since 1875?’ Was awarded full marks and was written in timed conditions- fully solid essay Main points covered: Public Health Act 1875 Government anti-smoking campaigns NHS and the Labour government 4 solid, complex and complete paragraphs